Friday, March 14, 2008

Bannerjee baboo is true to The Cause

Comrade Bannerjee, on having an orgasm,
Said he'd much rather an orgase havm,
For experiencing another
Would make even a Brother
Of the Communist Church stoop to bourgeoism.

2 comments:

J. Alfred Prufrock said...

Your scansion could do with some work.

And on some occasions (e.g. Banerjee's cause) your construction as well!

J.A.P.

B. Jabberjee said...

Hallo, again. Yes, I've two left metrical feet. I'm learning, I'm learning.

Some of the messy construction was deliberate, to allow me to rhyme as well as indulge in wanton wordplay. I lack refinement but, with sufficient practice, that will (hopefully) soon be remedied.

-Jabberjee